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Flowers

siting out on a hill wating the ocaen waves and i come across a beatiful flower that was pink 
petals,green thin stim, and yellow fuzzy circle in the middle.i wounder if the flower could do 
something bad to someone, like if someone tryed to pick it.do you think that it would go out 
of the ground and slap someone then get back on the ground and acked like nothing 
happed.i would call it flower 
power.                                                                                                                            
                                                                                                                                      
                                                                                                                                      
    soon every flower would know abbout itand they would pop out of the ground and save 
every town that is in danger of anything and every thing.everyone would love them.no more 
picking flowers and killing them.it would be so 
cool.                                                                                                                               
                                                                                                                                      
                                                                                                                                      
   well like that would happen.it is only a flower.thats just my amagenashen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/17/2010 9:34:00 PM
Kayla thanks for the nice comment you left on one of my poems but you did not finish your thought in your sentence structure. This what you wrote to me, (Date: 4/9/2010 2:36:00 PM jennifer,i like your poem and iam any 10 years old i still got the point about) So now I wondering, about what? I love you so I want to give you some constructive criticism, Here goes, work on your grammar, your spelling and your sentence and poetry constructions and you'll see such a GREAT improvement in your poetry.
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Date: 4/19/2010 4:55:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Kayla. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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