Flowers

Most flowers bloom but that’s not me and you were like the leaves at fall they don’t bloom at all. Some petals dry on the winds they fly, that is more like us, crumbling to dust. Some seeds they grow just like our love for sure, through the grit and dirt we’re going to make it work. The trees they sway when the days are long but just like us they’re still standing strong! The rain it pours causing thunder storms , puddles galore , drowning with no air, smiling with out a care I just need you more.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/30/2023 11:23:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Cat Jones
Date: 10/31/2023 2:38:00 AM

Thank you so much x

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 10/28/2023 12:37:00 PM

A good poem. Well done.

Cat Jones
Date: 10/29/2023 1:50:00 AM

Thank you so much x