Flowering Star Magnolia

Star magnolia does bloom
As mockingbird sings in its leafless branches 
Gray clouds gloom

Forsythia
Through cold cries, spring slowly advances
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Star magnolia does bloom
Through cold cries, spring slowly advances
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Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2026 at 1:36 PM

This seems to be minichu? Yes, slowly but surely, spring is coming!

Andrea Dietrich

February 21, 2026 at 11:59 PM

I don't do them any more. He never gives me a win even when some of his winners are doing them wrong. Whatever!

Sara Kendrick

February 21, 2026 at 3:42 AM

Yes, Andrea, my trying to write a minichu. Very difficult form for me to write. I really don't like them at all. Thanks for the visit and yes spring is coming even though they say winter will hit us again with the temperatures dropping starting tonight and it being very cold Sunday night and Monday morning then for a few more days next week. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Nette Onclaud

February 19, 2026 at 9:10 PM

how adorable can this be,sara with poetic spins dancing in my heart!

Sara Kendrick

February 20, 2026 at 5:18 AM

Why, thank you, Nette. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K.

sara Etgen-Baker

February 19, 2026 at 5:29 PM

delightful imagery...I felt like I was in your flower garden. wishing you well, hugs, Sara B

Sara Kendrick

February 20, 2026 at 5:17 AM

Sara B., right now my yard looks sad, uncared for which it is. My husband would do some pruning, discarding of fallen limbs, flowers that were killed by the frost, making things neat, but I am no longer able to do that much so it is looking like it needs maintenance. I was hoping on a nice day maybe my grandsons would get out there and help me catch up. Thank you for the visit and nice review. The star magnolia has added beauty in that one place, I thank God for its beauty, and the Japanese Magnolia is trying to bloom. Sara K