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Flowering Fern

flowers and sharp blades by a blue, breeze rippled lake reflecting sunlight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/18/2014 10:08:00 AM
I see a beautiful painting with my mind's eye ! Thank you !! :)
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Date: 4/17/2014 7:14:00 AM
Unlimited beauty found within a minimum amount of words. Amazing.
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Date: 4/16/2014 2:00:00 PM
you have too many things going on Tim, talk about [the blades of grass] or the flowers - stay in present tense [ripple] if line three is the leap it's not an exciting leap - don't forget your other senses [ the blades of grass/ripple by the lake - fish rise] the word ripple gives us the breeze no need to say breeze Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2014 7:23:00 AM
This makes me think of summer and warm sunny days. Great poem..
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Date: 4/15/2014 11:35:00 PM
Hello, Tim, a beautiful reflecting image... the imagery makes this one of the best haiku, i've read in a long good while... XOX~ Linda
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Date: 4/15/2014 2:35:00 PM
very lovely, tim!
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Date: 4/15/2014 6:20:00 AM
Beautiful haiku Tim ... can just close my eyes and picture the whole scene which you created with words. // paul
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