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Flowering Fern

flowers and sharp blades
by a blue, breeze rippled lake
reflecting sunlight

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Carrie Richards

April 18, 2014 at 10:08 AM

I see a beautiful painting with my mind's eye ! Thank you !! :)

Monterey Sirak

April 17, 2014 at 7:14 AM

Unlimited beauty found within a minimum amount of words. Amazing.

Debbie Guzzi

April 16, 2014 at 2:00 PM

you have too many things going on Tim, talk about [the blades of grass] or the flowers - stay in present tense [ripple] if line three is the leap it's not an exciting leap - don't forget your other senses [ the blades of grass/ripple by the lake - fish rise] the word ripple gives us the breeze no need to say breeze Light & Love