Flower Songs For Emily

She lay on a hospital bed like a pale rose wilting on a pillow sham 
done were her days of counting every morsel of food and gram  

they told her if she stopped eating she would cease to live and die  
feeding tubes inside her nose, she stared into an anemic blue sky 

knowing that her final breath was near, she took her mother's hand 
as tears spilled on her hair of gold, she whispered, "mom,  I can't "

the girl who removed the chaff from the wheat no longer had to eat 
they placed a large sheet on her tiny frame and tiny little feet 

later as she lowered to the ground all of life just went askew  
an invisible waif had flown away without a change or point of view

scent of  green tea, honey, vine, moss and fruit, finally empirically ground
flower songs of beauty, she ate and drank, without making a single sound

as she lay on a cloud and watched the sun go down, it was the final call 
she felt thin, she felt beautiful, she wasn't hungry,  no,   not at all ...

April 30, 2021
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Koplin Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 2:59 PM
Well written and great delivery! Congratulations on your win!
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Mystic top poem!! really good and the ending is brilliant!! congrats on your win!
Agustin Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 12:04 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making us reflect about final breath, letting us thank the Lord for His promise of eternal security. God bless you.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 11:43 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your pen was writing overtime on this "Amazing" write. Have a blessed day..................
Rose  Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 3:26 PM
Thank you dear Paula, it was on a subject that was close to my heart, your visit is much appreciated.
Seeker Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Thank you for taking part in this contest, Mystic Rose. Congrats on your win and look forward to your participation in the next contest, ‘EMBRACE & RELEASE’. God bless!
Rose  Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Thank you Seeker, for honoring my poem, it made me very happy. Blessings.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 4:01 AM
Is this anorexia? What a pity. To lose a child for lack of food. My heart burst.
Rose  Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Yes Victor it speaks of an eating disorder. So many young people suffer from it, some even die of it. Thank you for stopping by.
Daniel Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 6:28 AM
A sad but a lovely tribute, Vie:)
Rose  Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 3:24 PM
Thank you Jo, for stopping by
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