Flower Song

Late evening, I waved my bye to the train 
In the railways, I saw a lonely flower in the rain
Dancing in wind fragile, frail and alone
The rest of her siblings must have been gone 

Alone with confidence she smiles in light
glimmering stars, her friends in night 
Four or Five who pass her wonders and stop
For they knew the value of beautiful in shop

I am home, Sitting under the tree with my pen
Trying to put my thought, just like other men
It will be soon morning, there will be sun
The flower will smile delightfully with fun
She will be praised soon, It won't take long
Garden or Rails her home, She owns her flower song !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/27/2025 8:43:00 AM
Thanks for this... I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2015 1:56:00 AM
G'day Jenny... Nice and lyrical. Thank you for posting - Lindsay
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Date: 2/20/2015 11:33:00 PM
Hi Jenny, a beautiful ending. Epic and strong. SKAT
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Date: 2/20/2015 9:27:00 AM
I love the word play and the way it seemed as though the flower was dancing in my mind great detail.
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Date: 2/20/2015 9:21:00 AM
Wonderful poem Jenny, great rhythm. Janet
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Date: 2/20/2015 9:19:00 AM
Such a flowerly poem with so much beauty. Nice one Jenny.
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Date: 2/20/2015 8:56:00 AM
- A wonderful rhyme poem, lovely song Jenny :) - I wish you a great weekend - // Anne-Lise :)
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