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Flower Punch

daffodils' gold glow
ingesting sun, a spring ode
pierce winter shutters












Haiku written: February 24, 2021
For Brian Strand July Contest

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Kim Merryman

July 2, 2021 at 8:21 PM

Brian, congrats on your wonderful win! Blessings, Kim M

Brian Sambourne

July 2, 2021 at 9:02 PM

Thank you, Kim. I appreciate your thumbs up congratulations. Best wishes, Brian

Jan Allison

July 1, 2021 at 12:48 AM

such a delightful image Brian, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Brian Sambourne

July 1, 2021 at 6:33 AM

Thank you , Jan. Be well. Sincerely, Brian

Paula Goldsmith

April 20, 2021 at 9:45 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I love daffodils. They are so pretty. Have a blessed day.......................

Brian Sambourne

April 20, 2021 at 11:09 AM

Hi Paula, Thanks very much for your drop by + for commenting on my submission. Best wishes always, Brian

Sara Kendrick

April 3, 2021 at 3:30 AM

Winter does make us feel shuttered. Enjoyed reading this ku. Congrats on this winner. Thanks for the visits. Sara

Brian Sambourne

April 3, 2021 at 7:40 AM

Thank you, Sara. Kind of you to comment favorably on this small sumission. Sincerely, Brian

Line Gauthier

March 6, 2021 at 12:46 PM

Congrats on your win, Brian ~

Brian Sambourne

March 6, 2021 at 1:09 PM

Hello Line, My appreciation for your note + for dropping by to read my submission. All the best, Brian

Kim Rodrigues

March 4, 2021 at 5:09 AM

The power of the flower to take in sun and warm us!

Brian Sambourne

March 4, 2021 at 7:02 AM

Hi Kim, Nothing like 'borrowing' a phrase from Hippie Days. Thank you for dropping by. Cheers Brian

David Kavanagh

March 4, 2021 at 2:08 AM

Heya Brian I do hope them winter shutters stay closed, too early to say, although your daffodils are a good omen, well deserved winning placement cheers David

Brian Sambourne

March 4, 2021 at 7:05 AM

Hi David, I did see some Daffodil tops poke through a sun-draped garden. It is a good omen. Thank you for your kind note. Brian