Flower Love

The warm fragrant summer breeze
Sweeps across my face whispering your gaze
Like the summer flowers blossoming deep within
My heart opens up and seeks the light that only you can fulfil
Like roots I search for you, knowing our love was deep and so very true
Your hand sweeps down and plucks me from the ground
Twirling me around and around to see my petals dance just for now
You smile at me, rub your nose up and down making me flutter
With one last sigh you put me in your jacket pocket and mutter
Forever and always my darling, forever and ever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 9/29/2012 2:10:00 PM
Gorgeous words together forming a delightful tale of love! A unique treat! Love and warmth, Jack xox
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Date: 8/14/2012 3:19:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your great work..Very creative, descriptive and expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Aimee Garside
Date: 8/14/2012 3:51:00 PM
Thank you for such kind words Sara ~hugs~ Aimee
Date: 8/12/2012 10:34:00 AM
Vividly beautiful. Thanks for your comments.
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Aimee Garside
Date: 8/12/2012 7:32:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words Willie :) ~hugs~ Aimee
Date: 5/26/2012 9:39:00 AM
A beautiful write dear poet ! How much more can one say ! Have a beautiful weekend Aimee....much love, james
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Aimee Garside
Date: 8/10/2012 5:09:00 PM
Thank you James, I'm glad you like it. Hope you have a lovely weekend too :) ~hugs~ Aimee
Date: 5/25/2012 7:49:00 PM
Ab-so-lut-ely LOVELY!!! '...whispering your gaze,' how cool is that! From a flower's perspective... SWEET! Best wishes, Keith :)
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Aimee Garside
Date: 5/26/2012 8:24:00 AM
Thank you for such nice words Keith, I'm glad you enjoyed my piece ~hugs~ Aimee
Date: 5/25/2012 6:57:00 PM
WOW,OUTSTANDING POEM DEAR!!!
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Aimee Garside
Date: 5/26/2012 8:21:00 AM
Thank you for the visit and comment Elliott ~hugs~ Aimee
Date: 5/25/2012 3:36:00 PM
Beautiful written poem Aimee, I love it - You are a good poet my friend. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Aimee Garside
Date: 5/25/2012 5:14:00 PM
Thank you for the very nice words Anne, you are too kind! ~Hugs~ Aimee.
Date: 5/25/2012 6:30:00 AM
Nice one aimee.....(Soupmail)
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Aimee Garside
Date: 5/25/2012 8:27:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and comment *Soupmail sent* ~hugs~ Aimee
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