Flower In the Weeds
In a garden which is hopeless
Because of weeds
Pink cosmos is blooming
Like hope
Like the stars of cosmic dust
They describe my love
I'm afraid that you won't admit
I'm afraid that you won't feel
I'm afraid that my flower blooms
In vain
It's so hard just to look at you
Because I can't look away
It's unfair that in front of your eyes
My flower fades
It was fate that I met you here
It was fate that I broke my rules
I thought you were a simple boy
That just looked good
But I was wrong
Your soul is pure as lake
Your soul is innocent like a child's
Take me in your hands
I'll never let you down
P.S. I tried to write using an inversion, a new stylistic device for me.
If you admit any mistakes, let me know, please.
Thanks for reading.
Lots of love.
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