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Little sister thought of bouquet so sweet, For her older sister, gift hard to beat. She gathered spring flowers, stem to top on Creating a bouquet bright as the sun. The bouquet grew bigger, out of control, Blocking her view, she couldn't see a soul. Holding it, she made her way to the deck, To surprise her sister, who'd be a wreck. With a cute smile, she offered the bouquet, Inside the bouquet, they vanished away. Mom and Dad are lwondering, in dismay, Where did the kids go? They can't find a way. Picture # 2

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Date: 8/20/2024 12:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in the contest. You had a great idea with this work. Thanks for sharing it with us. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 8/18/2024 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Flower Bouquet" write. Flowers make any day a wonderful day. Will you write part 2??? Have a blessed day/week.....................
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Date: 7/27/2024 2:03:00 PM
Parents better keep looking. I like this crazy poem.
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Date: 7/25/2024 2:46:00 PM
A little mystery story! You chose the really interesting picture
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Date: 7/25/2024 11:22:00 AM
Hello Jay , After reding this poem, i have wonderdd where did the children go? Did they pass away? Or was it the grandchildren that passed away? A mystery. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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