Paul Schneiter Poet Rhyme

Flower

My love is a flower
unfolded and symmetrical
decidedly delectable.

My love is a petal
seamless and silent
to a touch softly compliant.

My love is perfume
I am wont to consume
when it graces a room.

My love is a vision
of supernal design
who , thank God,
is gloriously mine.

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Brandy Nicole January 29, 2022 at 6:46 PM "My love is a flower, unfolded and symmetrical" Such a beautiful image, and I can see this in my mind. Your words caress softly around me and my heart. Thank you for being here, for being you. *You* are in my thoughts, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy Paul Schneiter January 31, 2022 at 4:16 PM Brandy, I cherish your words, whether in a comment or in a poem. You are unfailingly sweet and caring, and the epitome of poetic talent. I'll always be in your debt for all you have taught me. Hugs and love, Paul

Silpika Kalita January 16, 2022 at 5:50 PM A spectacular write, you treated the subject with so much elegance and grace! Thank you for the splendid share.... Silpika Paul Schneiter January 16, 2022 at 7:38 PM Sincere, grateful thanks. SILPIKA, for your comment. I hope I'm worthy of it. Every good wish to you and your cherished ones. Hugs, Paul

Lindsay Laurie January 12, 2022 at 5:43 PM Hello Paul ... there is so much about a flower that we yearn for in our lives - thank you Paul - Lindsay Paul Schneiter January 18, 2022 at 2:04 PM Hi, Lindsay. What you write is true: We yearn for the beauty of a flower. . for its fragrance. . . for its radiance. . .for its perfectly executed design. Wonderful comment, as usual. Hugs, P.

Deb M January 5, 2022 at 10:48 PM Hey Paul….welcome back! You haven’t been around for a while so great to see your name there! Such a lovely sweet poem…I enjoyed. Debx Paul Schneiter January 6, 2022 at 6:39 AM Thanks for the "welcome back," Deb M. Thanks, too, for the kind words about "Flower." I think there's a song titled "Don't Get Around Much Anymore." That's "me" these days. It's so very sweet of you to miss me. Hugs & Love, Paul

Jan Allison January 5, 2022 at 5:15 PM what a delightful poem Paul a joy to read, i especially love the final stanza, wishing you and your family all the best for the coming year:-) hugs Jan xx Paul Schneiter January 5, 2022 at 7:06 PM It's always a joy, Jan, to hear from you. Thank you for your kind words about my humble scribble. I cherish any and all words from your golden pen. I hope the new year is kind to you and your cherished ones. Hugs & Love, Paul