Flower

My love is a flower unfolded and symmetrical decidedly delectable. My love is a petal seamless and silent to a touch softly compliant. My love is perfume I am wont to consume when it graces a room. My love is a vision of supernal design who , thank God, is gloriously mine.

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/29/2022 6:46:00 PM

"My love is a flower, unfolded and symmetrical" Such a beautiful image, and I can see this in my mind. Your words caress softly around me and my heart. Thank you for being here, for being you. *You* are in my thoughts, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/31/2022 4:16:00 PM

Brandy, I cherish your words, whether in a comment or in a poem. You are unfailingly sweet and caring, and the epitome of poetic talent. I'll always be in your debt for all you have taught me. Hugs and love, Paul

Silpika Kalita

Date: 1/16/2022 5:50:00 PM

A spectacular write, you treated the subject with so much elegance and grace! Thank you for the splendid share.... Silpika

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/16/2022 7:38:00 PM

Sincere, grateful thanks. SILPIKA, for your comment. I hope I'm worthy of it. Every good wish to you and your cherished ones. Hugs, Paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/12/2022 5:43:00 PM

Hello Paul ... there is so much about a flower that we yearn for in our lives - thank you Paul - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/18/2022 2:04:00 PM

Hi, Lindsay. What you write is true: We yearn for the beauty of a flower. . for its fragrance. . . for its radiance. . .for its perfectly executed design. Wonderful comment, as usual. Hugs, P.

Deb M

Date: 1/5/2022 10:48:00 PM

Hey Paul….welcome back! You haven’t been around for a while so great to see your name there! Such a lovely sweet poem…I enjoyed. Debx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/6/2022 6:39:00 AM

Thanks for the "welcome back," Deb M. Thanks, too, for the kind words about "Flower." I think there's a song titled "Don't Get Around Much Anymore." That's "me" these days. It's so very sweet of you to miss me. Hugs & Love, Paul

Jan Allison

Date: 1/5/2022 5:15:00 PM

what a delightful poem Paul a joy to read, i especially love the final stanza, wishing you and your family all the best for the coming year:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/5/2022 7:06:00 PM

It's always a joy, Jan, to hear from you. Thank you for your kind words about my humble scribble. I cherish any and all words from your golden pen. I hope the new year is kind to you and your cherished ones. Hugs & Love, Paul