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Image result for pictures of a yard of a yellow weed that grows only in the spring I wanted one bloom but I received a yard of yellow weeds.

Flower

flower
dreamy, yellow
growing, showing, blooming
thousands, weedy, golden, blossoms
floret

blessingflowercinquain

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Victor Buhagiar

August 9, 2022 at 12:45 PM

One always appreciates carpets of flowers. Blessings

Sara Kendrick

August 9, 2022 at 3:48 PM

Victor, Those blossoms were dandelions which is mostly considered a weed over here now even though it was brought over by settlers as a food and medicinal source. It makes hundreds of seeds per blossom that are air born and will come up far from its original spot. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Jack Horne

April 11, 2019 at 2:40 PM

lovely cinquain, my friend

Sara Kendrick

April 11, 2019 at 4:56 PM

Jack, Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Eve Roper

April 11, 2019 at 8:23 AM

You did capture the feeling and color you were looking for in this Cinquain poem.Nicely done , Sara.

Sara Kendrick

April 11, 2019 at 4:57 PM

Eve, Thanks for the visit to my page. I am glad that you felt I captured the feeling and color. Sara

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

April 11, 2019 at 7:20 AM

Excellent description Sara. I always wondered who decides what a weed is and isn't. Couldn't those yellow weeds. Be a field of golden flowers? In any event, very nicely done. Yours, Allen

Sara Kendrick

April 11, 2019 at 5:03 PM

Allen, Yes, some weeds do have lovely flowers on them. I looked up weed and flower. Weeds can have flowers on them but if they are invasive or growing where you don't want them to grow or crowding out what you want to grow they are weeds. LOL..Sara