Flower

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Image result for pictures of a yard of a yellow weed that grows only in the spring I wanted one bloom but I received a yard of yellow weeds.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/9/2022 12:45:00 PM

One always appreciates carpets of flowers. Blessings

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2022 3:48:00 PM

Victor, Those blossoms were dandelions which is mostly considered a weed over here now even though it was brought over by settlers as a food and medicinal source. It makes hundreds of seeds per blossom that are air born and will come up far from its original spot. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 4/11/2019 2:40:00 PM

lovely cinquain, my friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/11/2019 4:56:00 PM

Jack, Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 4/11/2019 8:23:00 AM

You did capture the feeling and color you were looking for in this Cinquain poem.Nicely done , Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/11/2019 4:57:00 PM

Eve, Thanks for the visit to my page. I am glad that you felt I captured the feeling and color. Sara

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/11/2019 7:20:00 AM

Excellent description Sara. I always wondered who decides what a weed is and isn't. Couldn't those yellow weeds. Be a field of golden flowers? In any event, very nicely done. Yours, Allen

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/11/2019 5:03:00 PM

Allen, Yes, some weeds do have lovely flowers on them. I looked up weed and flower. Weeds can have flowers on them but if they are invasive or growing where you don't want them to grow or crowding out what you want to grow they are weeds. LOL..Sara