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05/23/25

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Third Place

Contest by  Joseph May

Shocked and shattered on betrayal. Sank in nasty dreadful dismal. Environ became surreal, as my love was true and loyal. Continuously tears to flow Didn’t know, how tears-flow to slow. Darkness in life to embower. Dropped and dried all abloom flowers Curses from my fate to shower Each second seemed to be an hour. No glimpse of light even to glow. Confused what to do, where to go ? On my mind lost any control. Tried my best at least to console my grief stricken serene soul. At last willpower took vital role Also Time acted being best healer. " The darkened sky stole my tears."

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Date: 5/30/2025 8:49:00 AM
Very nicely penned Anisha, Congrats on your win in my contest
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Date: 5/23/2025 9:57:00 PM
Anisha, Thieves in the night, we don't fear. Hope is one way to be found, a different in loss. So don't fear, have hope. -Richard
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 5/24/2025 6:56:00 AM
Thanks for visit and appreciation. Blessings

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