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05/23/25

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Third Place

Contest by  Joseph May

Flow Of Tears

     Shocked and shattered on betrayal.
     Sank in nasty dreadful dismal.
      Environ became surreal,
     as my love was true and loyal.
     Continuously tears to flow
     Didn’t know, how tears-flow to slow.

    Darkness in life to embower.
    Dropped and dried all abloom flowers 
    Curses from my fate to shower
    Each second seemed to be an hour.
    No glimpse of light even to glow.
    Confused what to do, where to go ?

   On my mind lost any control.
   Tried my best at least to console 
    my grief stricken serene soul.
    At last willpower took vital role
   Also Time acted being best healer.
   " The darkened sky stole my tears."
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May Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 8:49 AM
Very nicely penned Anisha, Congrats on your win in my contest
Theraven Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 9:57 PM
Anisha, Thieves in the night, we don't fear. Hope is one way to be found, a different in loss. So don't fear, have hope. -Richard
Dutta Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 6:56 AM
Thanks for visit and appreciation. Blessings
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