Flourishing Heart

trapped, in bitter anguish,         heart  flourishing in the greenhouse


1/15/2021

20-Word Max - Do It With Feeling Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
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Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 10:54 AM
A most interesting one-liner, Eve. congrats for your win.
Proxenos Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Eve my friend this was bound to win, such an emotional one liner - congratulations. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Indeed, a one-liner written with and oozing feelings, Eve. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs // paul
Krutsinger Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 7:13 PM
Wonderfully penned.
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) hugs jan xx
Theraven Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 2:45 PM
Eve, Very nice gilded lesson in green. -Richard
Sands Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 6:33 AM
Oh, heart flourishing in the greenhouse! I love it Eve :)
Ball Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 9:30 PM
Oh Lopvely. Actually I had a mental image of butterflies being born in a greenhouse. They're safer there. Good luck in the contest. Good job. God Bless, JB
Buhagiar Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 11:33 AM
Plenty of emotions on each phrase. ~~
Allison Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 9:59 AM
an emotional piece Eve:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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