M. L. Kiser Poet Verse

Floral Friends In Support

Form: Lind30 

 Lovely tulips in bright bloom
ring in March with parrot tops
though the winds do pack their whop
with irises they withstand the strain.



3-3-2022
MARCH IN Poetry Contest
Andrea Dietrich

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Jennifer Proxenos March 21, 2022 at 9:46 AM MLK - many congrats - a deserved win on such a beautiful creative write, you do describe flowers so wonderfully. Hugs and blessings, Jenifer. M. L. Kiser May 30, 2022 at 3:16 PM Thank you.

Lindsay Laurie March 16, 2022 at 7:28 PM Hello M.L. ... winter is not completely white is it - thank you M.L. - Lindsay M. L. Kiser May 30, 2022 at 3:16 PM Not completely, but sometimes the sky is nearly white in winter.

Jan Allison March 14, 2022 at 4:03 PM oh i adore the parrot top tulips! Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx M. L. Kiser May 30, 2022 at 3:16 PM Thanks Jan.

Christuraj Alex March 13, 2022 at 7:18 PM Great description. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich March 13, 2022 at 3:31 PM I probably should have given greater leeway for poetic license on the pack a whop instead of wallop. haha. Congrats in my contest. I really do like your poem's theme. M. L. Kiser May 30, 2022 at 3:17 PM I like being different, it keeps people awake. Thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos March 6, 2022 at 11:04 AM Color power in this poem dear MLK - Great imagination from you and wonderful imagery portrayed for your reader. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Susan Woodrow March 4, 2022 at 11:56 AM parrot tops! love it and yes, the whop line brings out not just the wind but the flower colors I can just see!! Enjoyed immensely :)

Deb M March 3, 2022 at 10:15 PM Yes I’m with Gershon ….”do pack their whop”…..so cute loved that line especially. Debx M. L. Kiser May 30, 2022 at 3:17 PM Thanks Deb.

Gershon Wolf March 3, 2022 at 5:28 PM Their 'whop!' Just love it. ~ Packing heat M. L. Kiser May 30, 2022 at 3:18 PM Believe me if it's hard enough, it's a whop.