Sandra Adams Poet Diamante

Floods

river
                                                          dark, cold
                                             raging, rushing, haunting
                                             water, soil, sticks, stones
                                            mixing, tracing, challenging
                                                   lonely, desperate
                                                              minds

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Vicky Tsiluma October 18, 2012 at 12:02 AM Lovely! Love how you've done your Diamante - the show of emotion blended with the raging river gives an interesting perspective to the poem. Nice!

Michael J. Falotico October 15, 2012 at 4:28 PM Perfection!! Love it! Hugs Michael

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2012 at 2:45 PM HI, Sandra, saw that pretty blonde hair of yours in the community pictures and thought I would see your poems. I can't remember if I have ever talked with you before but I remember someone once mentioned a Sandra to me that was on site. I like reading short poems such as this one of yours. Let me go see your other diamente.

Sukmawati Komala October 15, 2012 at 12:36 AM ah.. the floods...well descripted work Sandra...nice share..enjoyed..luv SK <3

Poet Destroyer A October 14, 2012 at 8:24 PM Hola Sandra, once again.. Awe, another nice Diamante, i see this flood leading lots of minds into fear... enjoyed..pd