Flooding Hope

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Bright eyes are an echo of a damp sky. Vileness signs will never bother the moon. To risk creating darkness for a day. Bright eyes are an echo of a damp sky. Launched a cascade of pebbles on the way A torrent of hope across the heart soon? Bright eyes are an echo of a damp sky Vileness signs will never bother the moon. Written: April 27, 2023

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/28/2023 2:03:00 PM

- May hope always shine bright as moonlight, Las :) - Lovely written :) - hugs and happy weekend :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/28/2023 11:35:00 AM

Hi Lasaad, You penned a well-crafted triolet. Much enjoyed my friend;-) Alexis

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/28/2023 9:45:00 AM

Nicely penned Sotto. The moon has seen and heard it all yet remains undisturbed:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2023 11:14:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work tonight. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page to let me know I placed in your contest. Sara