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I want to Cry But, I Cant. I Wish i will But, I Wont I Want to shed a tear for every Broken Heart, for every broken heart theres a boy If i shed a tear for every Broken Heart, there'll soon be a Flood. A Flood which is from a Dead Heart, No More Pain, No More Cry's No More Feeling's No More Heart By: Angel4eva (plzz comment if u like my poem... thank u for reading) plzz rate

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Date: 5/29/2011 4:10:00 PM
Beautiful expressions with apt images on the flood of feelings, Brittany. I enjoyed the flow of emotions
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Date: 5/29/2011 12:43:00 PM
Oh! B. Andrews, I can see your heart is right... sadly one can cry an ocean if we combined every broken heart... and I sure like poem... and only if we had no heart....take care,.. p.d.
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Date: 5/27/2011 11:05:00 AM
There's certainly a lot of emotion in your writing, I can feel it. Great poem!
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Date: 5/27/2011 9:06:00 AM
very meaningful poem on a very sad situation.
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