Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Flood -

scream in pain
                                    the ceaseless rain
                                    kneeled down in the mud










29/12/2021
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Modern Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Chetta Achara 
howmanysyllables.com/ 3- 4- 5
1st place in the contest

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Paul Callus January 5, 2022 at 1:39 PM Back with congratulations on placing first, Anne-Lise!! Well done! Hugs // paul

Sam Kauffman January 4, 2022 at 2:01 PM Anne-Lise, congratulations on your first place win with this powerfully written, graphically pictured portrait of withering pain! Happy New Year. Sending warm hugs!

Connie Marcum Wong January 4, 2022 at 8:31 AM I love your entry my friend. It is wonderful to see it win a Trophy! Congratulations. New year blessings xxoo

Howard Kerr January 4, 2022 at 4:50 AM Anne-Lise, Congratulations on your podium 1 placement with this deeply moving work Thanks for your comment on L Letter Link. Howard

Kim Rodrigues January 2, 2022 at 8:49 AM You captured pain in this brief poem! In the muck! Congratulations, Anne-Lise!

Delice Arleen Skelly January 2, 2022 at 2:55 AM Well done Anne, congratulations...Delice

Eve Roper January 1, 2022 at 10:36 PM Back with congratulations

Paula Goldsmith January 1, 2022 at 10:40 AM Back with Congratulations on this win. A wonderful Haiku write and picture. Have a Blessed Day/New Year with hugs.............

Malabika Ray Choudhury January 1, 2022 at 9:52 AM Congratulations, Dear Poet! Outstanding ! Love ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex January 1, 2022 at 9:35 AM Wow! Such beautiful work! Congratulations!

Chetta Achara January 1, 2022 at 7:20 AM Congratulations on your win in Modern Haiku contest. Well written

Paul Callus December 31, 2021 at 6:17 AM The burdens of life can easily bring us down to our knees, Anne-Lise, if we give in without a fight! Let us always be positive and look forward with hope and faith. ~ I wish you a happy, peaceful and healthy new year, my friend. Hugs // paul

Paulette Calasibetta December 30, 2021 at 5:02 PM Oh dear, not what we could call a spa treatment, is it? Love your Haiku though! Good Luck in the contest. Wishing you a very Happy New Year! Paulette

Rico Leffanta December 30, 2021 at 10:56 AM At last, someone who can truly say she is bogged down! Best of luck in the contest! Aloha!

Panagiota Romios December 30, 2021 at 4:13 AM A powerful haiku Panagioita

Victor Buhagiar December 30, 2021 at 1:45 AM Looks like a quagmire to me. Hope she will find help. Great haiku. Best for a win. Hugs xx

Joanna Daniel December 29, 2021 at 10:40 PM A powerful haiku, Sunshine:) Happy New Year to you and your family:)

Unseeking Seeker December 29, 2021 at 7:02 PM Intense! Good luck for the contest and Happy New Year, Sunshine!

Eve Roper December 29, 2021 at 2:09 PM deep and emotional write, well done. Happy New Year with many Blessings

Tom Cunningham December 29, 2021 at 2:03 PM A frightening scenario Anne that will become all too common with climate change. Tom

David Kavanagh December 29, 2021 at 1:36 PM Oh this is so nice Anne-Lise from a poetic stance, your haiku is buried with depth of meaning, great one for the contest, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith December 29, 2021 at 1:30 PM A wonderful Haiku write and picture. I can't remember doing one with a 3- 4- 5. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day and New Year 2022...........

Sotto Poet December 29, 2021 at 12:48 PM Great Haiku, Anne-Lise. I really enjoyed reading this modern Haiku and decided to try it. BEST LUCK, and best wishes for a happy and healthy new year. Anne-Lise Andresen December 29, 2021 at 12:53 PM - I prefer 5-7-5 haiku, Las ... but, today I am "modern" ... for the contset :) - Thank you for your comment and good wishes - Happy New Year - hugs // Anne-Lise :)