Flock of Doves

the flock of doves rest on the grass with fallen seed all rise in a woosh Heidi Sands 11/23/21

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/23/2021 3:56:00 PM

Hello Heidi, I can just picture this scene. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/24/2021 11:46:00 AM

Hi Heidi, thank you Caren. No it is I whishing you a Happy Thanksgivimng Day celebration. Mine was last month. Hugs.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/23/2021 4:46:00 PM

Hi Darlene. I am happy to hear tha. I appreciate your kind comments. Thank you. I hope you have a nice Thanksgiving :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/23/2021 1:01:00 PM

perfect description Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/23/2021 3:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan! Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/23/2021 11:33:00 AM

Three lines--three images. Splendid write, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/23/2021 3:31:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. You have brought a smile :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/23/2021 10:56:00 AM

Can just picture the scene Heidi and hear that whoosh of take-off. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/23/2021 11:18:00 AM

Great to hear Tom. Thank you :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/23/2021 10:36:00 AM

Yours is a lovely image, Heidi, and I absolutely love the 3rd line. ~ Warm regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/23/2021 11:17:00 AM

Thank you Paul. I am happy to hear that. I hope your day is going well :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/23/2021 10:09:00 AM

Heidi, I love this. It has an amazing texture of images. I can feel and hear the "whoosh!" We have doves that visit our garden often and I love their coos in the morning!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/23/2021 10:18:00 AM

Thank you Sam. Yes, I love to hear the coos too. That is nice you get to enjoy them in your garden :)