Flock of Doves

the flock of doves rest
        on the grass with fallen seed
                all rise in a woosh

Heidi Sands

11/23/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 3:56 PM
Hello Heidi, I can just picture this scene. Hugs.
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November 24, 2021 at 11:46 AM
Hi Heidi, thank you Caren. No it is I whishing you a Happy Thanksgivimng Day celebration. Mine was last month. Hugs.
Sands Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 4:46 PM
Hi Darlene. I am happy to hear tha. I appreciate your kind comments. Thank you. I hope you have a nice Thanksgiving :)
Allison Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 1:01 PM
perfect description Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
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November 23, 2021 at 3:32 PM
Thank you so much Jan! Hugs :)
Pandit Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 11:33 AM
Three lines--three images. Splendid write, Heidi.
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November 23, 2021 at 3:31 PM
Thank you Vijay. You have brought a smile :)
Cunningham Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 10:56 AM
Can just picture the scene Heidi and hear that whoosh of take-off. Tom
Sands Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Great to hear Tom. Thank you :)
Callus Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 10:36 AM
Yours is a lovely image, Heidi, and I absolutely love the 3rd line. ~ Warm regards // paul
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November 23, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Thank you Paul. I am happy to hear that. I hope your day is going well :)
Kauffman Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Heidi, I love this. It has an amazing texture of images. I can feel and hear the "whoosh!" We have doves that visit our garden often and I love their coos in the morning!
Sands Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 10:18 AM
Thank you Sam. Yes, I love to hear the coos too. That is nice you get to enjoy them in your garden :)
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