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Flock of Birds Paint the Sky Beautiful

under the blue sky over the earth's pie one thru ten they fly fifty five birds spry followers not shy a triangles ply on point, flanked they vie I can hear their cry I can see their tri wings on wings they lie as all birds comply and my joys sky high yet I blink my eye and swish they've gone by 9/29/22 A Flock of Birds Poetry Contest Sponsor-Julia Ward N/A

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Connie Pachecho

Date: 10/6/2022 12:24:00 PM

I thought this poem was witty but one wouldn't know by looking at the results. Maybe I should leave notes.--under the blue sky over the earth's pie (the flock of birds are under the clouds, under the blue skies and over the crust of the earth/pie).--one thru 10 they vie, first row 1 alpha bird, 2nd row 2 birds, 3rd row 3 birds ... and so forth to the 10th row totals 55 birds spry/active. What shape is formed? A triangle, on point, flanked ... they vie ... all comply-wings on wings lie-sequential

Michael Tor

Date: 9/29/2022 6:56:00 PM

Nicely written Connie it is the season for them going south...

Connie Pachecho
Date: 10/1/2022 7:10:00 AM

Thank you