Teddy Kimathi Poet Monoku

Floating On Dreams

soothingly and gently I float
                            my boat knows no dryness

inside the river glitters dreams
                                     they beckon me to get in

depth of the river gives me fright
                                    they tell me I won't drown

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Poet Destroyer A February 27, 2016 at 2:18 AM I wouldn't have it any other way

Poet Destroyer A February 26, 2016 at 9:52 AM Anytime Teddy Kimathi February 27, 2016 at 1:37 AM Thanks Linda.... Have a great weekend!! ;-) <3

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 21, 2016 at 11:12 PM Yet another wonderful poem n win Teddy.. big congrats! Teddy Kimathi February 26, 2016 at 5:36 AM Thank you so much Dr. Upma!!! *^_^*

Eve Roper February 21, 2016 at 9:10 PM Congratulations on your “River of Dreams” win , Teddy! Hugs Eve Teddy Kimathi February 26, 2016 at 5:35 AM Thanks so much Eve!!! *^_^*

Susan Gentry February 21, 2016 at 7:10 PM Congratulations! Teddy Kimathi February 26, 2016 at 5:34 AM Thanks Susan!!! *^_^*

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2016 at 10:28 AM WAY to GO, Teddy. Congrats on your win. Teddy Kimathi February 26, 2016 at 5:34 AM Thanks Andrea!!! *^_^*

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 10:14 AM Teddy, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~ Teddy Kimathi February 26, 2016 at 5:33 AM Hi Linda. Thank you so much for your applause, and enjoying my verse!!!! *^_^* <3

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2016 at 5:50 PM Nicely done, Teddy. I hope she counts it as three lines. I like how you made them like waves! Teddy Kimathi February 18, 2016 at 1:21 AM I'm crossing my fingers too, aabout my poem's form :-x Thank you for enjoying my work. ^_^ Maybe we can call it "Andrea's wave form", lol. I hadn't noticed before, that I had created waves in words...