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Floating Leaf

Floating Leaf by Amy Swanson Little floating leaf Softly swirling in the wind Unending journey

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Chitra Lakhera

Date: 12/2/2008 7:54:00 PM

So cute! I can imagine this. You are a great observer of nature. Love, Chitra

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/2/2008 4:02:00 PM

Wonderful haiku, which is one of my favorite forms of poetry. I love the idea of a swirling unending journey for the little leaf. Thank you so much for you comments on my poem "For the Love of Soup"...I appreciate it so much!

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/2/2008 12:35:00 PM

Excellent haiku Amy, love the structure you used. I love this form of poetry...Raul

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/2/2008 11:41:00 AM

wow this was amazing, like carrie said, you have mastered the haiku here. amazing job so elegant. Blessings, ~Michaela~

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/2/2008 11:15:00 AM

I think you have mastered the Haiku with this one, Amy! So soft and lovely! ~ Love,Carrie