Floating Leaf

Floating Leaf
     by Amy Swanson


Little floating leaf
     Softly swirling in the wind
            Unending journey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Lakhera Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 7:54 PM
So cute! I can imagine this. You are a great observer of nature. Love, Chitra
Thomas Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 4:02 PM
Wonderful haiku, which is one of my favorite forms of poetry. I love the idea of a swirling unending journey for the little leaf. Thank you so much for you comments on my poem "For the Love of Soup"...I appreciate it so much!
Moreno Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 12:35 PM
Excellent haiku Amy, love the structure you used. I love this form of poetry...Raul
Payne Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 11:41 AM
wow this was amazing, like carrie said, you have mastered the haiku here. amazing job so elegant. Blessings, ~Michaela~
Richards Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 11:15 AM
I think you have mastered the Haiku with this one, Amy! So soft and lovely! ~ Love,Carrie
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