Floating Hammock Descends

sea of azure waves descends
golden streams flood through porthole
black birds breach panorama 
tanners soak up residue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 4, 2012 at 7:30 AM
You placed the audience in a different setting than mine ....I like the breezes sensed with the accompanying birds...tanners too? Now there's a bird that I don't hear much of...panorama of pleasure! Your entry peachy keen too!! gwendolen
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