Floating Away

Waiting fading and floating away
I sit and wait to pass this day
The sky is purple 
The sun is red
Upon summoning the peaceful dead

Do your fingers itch?
Are you pistol whipped?
The ground is white
The trees are yellow
The other day I met a nice fellow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Cantu Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 8:09 PM
Wow, I like this poem, the second stanza reminds me a lot to Syd Barret and his chaotic lyrics jojojojo love it, truly love it!!!=) thanks for the experience @.@ =D
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July 15, 2009 at 8:38 AM
good poem it has a rhyme to it so maybe the form is one type of ryhme poems not sure which one for I myself don't know much about poetry to be honest this site is actually helping me learn how to write different poems and learn about them. thanks for your comment
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