Notes About The Poem

OPEN VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols relies upon 'the one breath limitation' this intuitive cadence pemits the 'reader' (reciter) to respond in an interpretative - interplay unique to the ' happening moment'

Floating Away

Reflections 
   night thoughts 
to memorize
& illume
speculations

a vision 
 of evening
in a 
  floating world 
with
a problem
of style
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September 20, 2023 at 11:46 AM
I like this. Great one Brian :)
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