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Floating

I sit in a coffee shop but I'm not there, not really To the faces around me its just an empty chair, empty The world is large but it's me alone, just me One individual, always standing alone I am closed off, the world is not there, not for me voice talk to me, hold no meaning for me, none My mind is my prison, my life just for me I am a walking corpse, with no place in the sun, no none Nobody can reach me, I am trapped under ice, alone Family and friends are no longer here, they are gone, just gone No life, no stress, no pressure, nothing Through life, though I have none, I am floating Floating.... just... floating... away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/27/2010 10:06:00 PM
I really like this one, Crystal. It's got great atmosphere! I think just how a lonely person might feel. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/27/2010 1:54:00 PM
Nice feelings of floating mind you have penned in this write, Crystal
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Date: 12/27/2010 1:02:00 PM
put on a smile and talk to somebody. T. S.
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