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Float

I dive in the deep end down deep too long my skin starts to tingle water burns my lungs not a strong swimmer as I come up and choke I can't swim back but I can float so I float

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Date: 1/9/2010 8:01:00 AM
Thank God that you floated because if you hadn't we would not be reading this opened ended write that I could go several different directions in the interpertation. Sara
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