Float

I dive in the deep end
down deep too long
my skin starts to tingle
water burns my lungs
not a strong swimmer
as I come up and choke
I can't swim back
but I can float
so I float
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 9, 2010 at 8:01 AM
Thank God that you floated because if you hadn't we would not be reading this opened ended write that I could go several different directions in the interpertation. Sara
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