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Flirting In the Rain

She wore that blue dress tonight again. Makes my heart ache on the verge of sin. The way it whispers on her skin. It looks like the wind.....flirting in the rain. Flirting in the rain on our first date. At Stephanie's house on the fire escape. It was the best day of my life. Right then I knew you'd be my wife. It was one more time if I recall. Downtown at the Baybrook mall. You told me forever kid. As I held your hand. Like I never did. We walked outside in the mundane. There we were,flirting in the rain....

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Date: 8/3/2016 2:20:00 PM
Anthony, congrats on your placement int he contest :)-luloo
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Anthony August
Date: 8/3/2016 4:46:00 PM
thank you luloo
Date: 8/3/2016 8:58:00 AM
Engaging lines, Anthony -- a combination of Gene Kelly's Dancing In The Rain and a Russ Meyer flick. ;-) Congrats on your placement!
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Anthony August
Date: 8/3/2016 1:11:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 8/3/2016 8:24:00 AM
This is lovely Anthony,congratulations to you!
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Anthony August
Date: 8/3/2016 1:12:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 8/3/2016 7:44:00 AM
This is a very good poem with arguably the best use of the idiom as described by the rules of the contest. You combined the expression “Flirting in the Rain” both literally and as an idiom seamlessly within the context of your work. Thank you for the brilliant effort. Congrats on your 4th place win in the Create an Idiom contest!
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Anthony August
Date: 8/3/2016 1:12:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/28/2016 8:40:00 PM
This is lovely, Anthony,, congratulations on your 101 in a row contest win. Luv **SKAT**
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Anthony August
Date: 7/29/2016 12:25:00 AM
ThAnk you SKAT it means alot
Date: 7/27/2016 9:47:00 PM
Hi Anthony, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my latest blog "THE REAL ME." Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Anthony August
Date: 7/27/2016 10:36:00 PM
thank you very much Linda,I'm very greatful
Date: 7/10/2016 6:17:00 AM
Ineffable images of tender feelings living there in your poem, a great heart to cover the world entire.
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Anthony August
Date: 7/10/2016 12:27:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/10/2016 3:42:00 AM
Nice flirting in the rain. Skat
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Anthony August
Date: 7/10/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thank you

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