Flight of the Cranes

cranes water dance flapping wings before their flight never to return May 22, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/25/2021 1:20:00 PM

"never to return" - not exactly the same ever again, for sure.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/22/2021 9:31:00 AM

Perfect!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/22/2021 9:47:00 AM

Thanks so much, Unseeking Seeker.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/22/2021 6:41:00 AM

Wonderful write. love the idea of the water dance... God bless you always, Love, Gina

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/22/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thanks so much, Gina. I appreciate your comment.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/22/2021 5:16:00 AM

This is beautiful ! I can see the dance. You do so well with imagery in your poems. I can still see the Blackberries from your other poem recently :)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/22/2021 8:46:00 AM

Heidi, thank you. I appreciate your reads and your sweet comments.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/22/2021 3:33:00 AM

Heavenly dance! Divine Haiku! Excellent imagery dearest friend, L. Milton!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/22/2021 8:47:00 AM

Thank you, Demetrios. I'm so happy you enjoyed my haiku.