Flight of the Cranes

cranes water dance flapping wings before their flight never to return
May 22, 2021
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Krutsinger Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 1:20 PM
"never to return" - not exactly the same ever again, for sure.
Seeker Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 9:31 AM
Perfect!
Hankins Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 9:47 AM
Thanks so much, Unseeking Seeker.
Mcintosh Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 6:41 AM
Wonderful write. love the idea of the water dance... God bless you always, Love, Gina
Hankins Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Thanks so much, Gina. I appreciate your comment.
Sands Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 5:16 AM
This is beautiful ! I can see the dance. You do so well with imagery in your poems. I can still see the Blackberries from your other poem recently :)
Hankins Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Heidi, thank you. I appreciate your reads and your sweet comments.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 3:33 AM
Heavenly dance! Divine Haiku! Excellent imagery dearest friend, L. Milton!
Hankins Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 8:47 AM
Thank you, Demetrios. I'm so happy you enjoyed my haiku.
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