Carrie Richards Poet Haiku

Flight of a Fancy Sky

sparrows meander

           over rainbow reflections....

                              a flight of fancy




                      swept from mother earth

                    the sun snuggles into clouds….

                           pillows of pastel

               
I will make a wish.....

     the dark clouds are throwing out

            rainbow confetti

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Line Gauthier April 16, 2018 at 8:24 PM Lovely imagery, Carrie.

Poet Destroyer A May 24, 2012 at 6:20 PM Carrie, i like the flight.. and the sky is rather fancy isn't it... Mother Earth, sure knows how to put on a show... Congratulations, with your ROYGBIV of beauty~ always*PD

Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2012 at 4:50 PM wowowow. another wowser!!! Congrats on the winner list. Deserves a top place!!

Carol Sunshine Brown May 24, 2012 at 12:01 PM Congratulations on your 3rd place win in my "Rainbow Haiku Weekend"contest Carrie. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich July 14, 2011 at 8:24 PM Yours were gorgeous haiku. I'm glad you and I and a few others at least had a chance to participate with our awesome haiku. haha. Congratulations, Carrie.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 12, 2011 at 11:38 AM I found your haiku to be very yummy, Carrie (heehee maybe I am hungry) Reminds me of a Barney song, If All the Raindrops :D Enjoyed this one, congrats on your win :D

Carolyn Devonshire July 12, 2011 at 11:34 AM Delightful description of the rainbows as "cotton candy dreams" and a "popsicle bridge," Carrie. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 12, 2011 at 5:16 AM Congrats Carrie on your exciting win with this dazzling assignment my friend.. u sure met the challenge of the contest..now enjoy many kudos for a great win..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 12, 2011 at 5:12 AM Congratulations Carrie on your win in the "Assignment" contest of P.D. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta July 12, 2011 at 4:16 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., carrie

Nette Onclaud July 12, 2011 at 12:56 AM hi, carrie...swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Poet Destroyer A July 12, 2011 at 12:45 AM Carrie,,Congratulations on a poem well done! Thank you for supporting my contest~ I sure enjoyed every entry,..p.d.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair June 20, 2011 at 7:49 PM nice imagery...full of poetry

Dr.Ram Mehta June 20, 2011 at 3:40 PM What a lovely visuals you have created with apt images,

Michael J. Falotico June 20, 2011 at 2:30 PM Beautiful poetry my dear Carrie...luv Michael