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Flight Number Three Two K

I bid you farewell my friend I'll be on the next plane of no return Number three two k a ticket one way in forever gone to stay And if you ever come to miss me in want to hear my voice Just remember So many days i dialled your number So many calls never been answered You left me no other choice And if you ever come to need me Just remember So many nights i knocked on your blue door I heard soft music in the background but there was nobody home. I bid you farewell my friend I'll be on the next plane of no return Number three two k a ticket one way in forever gone to stay And tomorrow there s' a sunrise in a yesterday s' a gloom in today there is a sunset and above there s' a half moon.
Charma (fiction poem)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/4/2012 12:47:00 AM
Coming back here dear Charma to say thank you and I hope you are doing well :) Have a wonderful Easter celebration! Hugs to you!! :D
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Date: 3/28/2012 5:29:00 AM
Just a great poem Charma, You tell such a compelling story and get the emotions working. The last four lines are so subliminal and satisfying.
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Date: 3/24/2012 10:17:00 AM
my wife has enjoyed your writing of this poem very much Charmaine and has expressed love to you always. Ron.
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Date: 4/4/2012 7:12:00 AM
Thanks Ron .. Thanks dear Linda
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Date: 4/1/2012 6:22:00 PM
. . . OK : )
Date: 3/24/2012 2:53:00 AM
Charma, this is just great, flows perfectly..have a great weekend..David
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Date: 3/24/2012 1:08:00 AM
This sure made me wonder what happened between them-- very intriguing poem, sweetie lucky Charma :)-- thank you so much again for dropping by my blog-- it was fun having you there :D-- and "speck you late think!" Wow, I love that! :D Enjoy your day!! :) Super hugs to you!
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Date: 3/23/2012 11:13:00 PM
A wonderful poem filled with strength and sadness. I enjoyed reading it tonight. God bless, Rhonda
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Date: 3/23/2012 8:39:00 AM
maybe fiction, yet so true to life, excellent poem. Charmaine. harry
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Date: 3/23/2012 8:20:00 AM
I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Charmaine. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2012 7:45:00 AM
Truthfully a beautiful piece you have here. I don't even know what to say. It's definitely one of my favorite poem right now.
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Date: 3/23/2012 7:30:00 AM
a great poem by you with a tinge of sadness.Enjoyed the read Charma.
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Date: 3/23/2012 7:24:00 AM
Awesome charma.. love it xxx Hugs
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