Flight Ending

outstretched wings align descending with precision great pelican lands Written on 4/3/2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2016 8:12:00 PM

Perfectly described. Congrats to you, Laura.

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/7/2016 10:03:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2016 3:29:00 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/7/2016 3:43:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words, Sara! I appreciate them :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/7/2016 2:58:00 PM

Congratulations Laura

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/7/2016 3:43:00 PM

Thank you, Nayda :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2016 1:33:00 PM

I thought I had commented on this one....but never mind, it still sounds good:) Congratulations to you Laura! // paul

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/7/2016 3:44:00 PM

Thank you, Paul :)

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/7/2016 9:27:00 AM

That's what I like about you Laura! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/7/2016 3:45:00 PM

So kind of you to say this, Hans! I'll check out your poems, too :)