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Flight Ending

outstretched wings align     descending with precision   great pelican lands






Written on 4/3/2016

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Andrea Dietrich

April 7, 2016 at 8:12 PM

Perfectly described. Congrats to you, Laura.

Laura Leiser

April 7, 2016 at 10:03 PM

Thank you, Andrea :)

Sara Kendrick

April 7, 2016 at 3:29 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Laura Leiser

April 7, 2016 at 3:43 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words, Sara! I appreciate them :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

April 7, 2016 at 2:58 PM

Congratulations Laura

Laura Leiser

April 7, 2016 at 3:43 PM

Thank you, Nayda :)

Paul Callus

April 7, 2016 at 1:33 PM

I thought I had commented on this one....but never mind, it still sounds good:) Congratulations to you Laura! // paul

Laura Leiser

April 7, 2016 at 3:44 PM

Thank you, Paul :)

Hansteven Selfa

April 7, 2016 at 9:27 AM

That's what I like about you Laura! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

Laura Leiser

April 7, 2016 at 3:45 PM

So kind of you to say this, Hans! I'll check out your poems, too :)