Notes About The Poem

Flight

Bubbles in the form of dancing smiles.
Up, up, up they go before they pop.
Belief in better days ahead - party
Block in parking lot, petting zoo out back.
Lean in and hear, “local library lends books.”
Energy of eager who’s, what’s, wise.
Synergy of flapping wings and tasty ices too.

Believing his birdy eyes — a crowd
Intentionally gathering. Naked faces!
Roar of hovercraft
Driven by remote control.

Duped, stupefied,
Robin uses his God-given wings,
Overzealous, to size up this intruder.
Now crowded in evening-blue, fore-twilight sky,
Epitaph of a salesman playing chicken.

5/22/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Buehler Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 11:03 AM
Bubbles in the form of dancing smiles. Your cleverly done acrostic is filled with awesome imagery. So enjoyable, Kim. :=)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 3:31 PM
Thank you, Evelyn, :)
Foster Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 6:41 AM
Nicely done... Ann
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 1:28 PM
Thank you, Ann!
Poet Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 5:12 PM
Great Symbolism and deeply perfectly executed, I really enjoyed the reading of your wonderful Acrostic. Have a peaceful evening. Hugs and regards
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 4:22 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Y. Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 1:21 PM
Hi Kim, You penned such a well written acrostic.I loved the carefree tone and vibe of your verse. I found it uplifting as well. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 3:59 PM
Thank you, Alexis!
Theraven Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 7:51 PM
Kim, Victor and Demetrios got it right in their comments for this fine Acrostic. I can't sum up the words scrambled in my head much less put to page. -Richard
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 4:45 AM
Thank you so much, Richard!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 5:53 AM
Outstanding capability of composing such acrostic. I can never write one. You did well. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Thank you, Victor! :)
Trifiatis Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 5:38 AM
A panoramic view of imagery, feelings, and ideas expressed in a stunning Acrostic. Well done, my dearest friend, Kim. Blessings and hugs xxx
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
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