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Bubbles in the form of dancing smiles.
Up, up, up they go before they pop.
Belief in better days ahead - party
Block in parking lot, petting zoo out back.
Lean in and hear, “local library lends books.”
Energy of eager who’s, what’s, wise.
Synergy of flapping wings and tasty ices too.

Believing his birdy eyes — a crowd
Intentionally gathering. Naked faces!
Roar of hovercraft
Driven by remote control.

Duped, stupefied,
Robin uses his God-given wings,
Overzealous, to size up this intruder.
Now crowded in evening-blue, fore-twilight sky,
Epitaph of a salesman playing chicken.

5/22/2021

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/29/2021 11:03:00 AM

Bubbles in the form of dancing smiles. Your cleverly done acrostic is filled with awesome imagery. So enjoyable, Kim. :=)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2021 3:31:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn, :)

Ann Foster

Date: 5/24/2021 6:41:00 AM

Nicely done... Ann

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2021 1:28:00 PM

Thank you, Ann!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/23/2021 5:12:00 PM

Great Symbolism and deeply perfectly executed, I really enjoyed the reading of your wonderful Acrostic. Have a peaceful evening. Hugs and regards

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2021 4:22:00 AM

Thank you, Lasaad!

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/23/2021 1:21:00 PM

Hi Kim, You penned such a well written acrostic.I loved the carefree tone and vibe of your verse. I found it uplifting as well. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2021 3:59:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/22/2021 7:51:00 PM

Kim, Victor and Demetrios got it right in their comments for this fine Acrostic. I can't sum up the words scrambled in my head much less put to page. -Richard

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2021 4:45:00 AM

Thank you so much, Richard!