Flickering Iris

sharp splinters of white 
lightning harvest in raindrops
flash within my eyes







This is for Raul's "Shards of Light" contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 9, 2010 at 4:13 PM
Love the title! Good use of imagery for a creative view. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for stopping by to comment on my poem. Have a good weekend. Karen
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April 9, 2010 at 3:24 PM
Seeyam~ I love this piece I hope you do well in the contest! Laura :)
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April 9, 2010 at 2:08 PM
Love the contrast in this wonderful write.
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April 9, 2010 at 2:05 PM
Great write in this Haiku. If for the contest should do well...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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