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Flickering Iris

sharp splinters of white lightning harvest in raindrops flash within my eyes This is for Raul's "Shards of Light" contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/9/2010 4:13:00 PM
Love the title! Good use of imagery for a creative view. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for stopping by to comment on my poem. Have a good weekend. Karen
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Date: 4/9/2010 3:24:00 PM
Seeyam~ I love this piece I hope you do well in the contest! Laura :)
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Date: 4/9/2010 2:08:00 PM
Love the contrast in this wonderful write.
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Date: 4/9/2010 2:05:00 PM
Great write in this Haiku. If for the contest should do well...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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