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what avail, awareness without freedom
why shines not, light of our luminescence 
our heart yearns for more, we must overcome 

we feel the rhythm within our bosom 
joy experience in fleeting transience 
what avail, awareness without freedom

each sensorium wishes to blossom
not part quintessence but full effulgence 
our heart yearns for more, we must overcome 

discontent with bliss vibration seldom
let unbroken be, dance of innocence 
what avail, awareness without freedom

no fear residuum in Gods kingdom
flickers yet flame of bliss incandescence 
our heart yearns for more, we must overcome 

need jump quantum to imbibe full spectrum 
radiance must outpour in permanence 
what avail, awareness without freedom
our heart yearns for more, we must overcome 

29-May-2021

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Date: 5/29/2021 6:38:00 PM
I love to jump quantum every chance I get lol, your poem is out of this world and I love it, thank you :)
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Date: 5/29/2021 8:57:00 PM
Thank you, Mystic Rose! :)
Date: 5/29/2021 7:36:00 AM
A beautiful villanelle. Your imagery is prefect.
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Date: 5/29/2021 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Victor!

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