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what avail, awareness without freedom why shines not, light of our luminescence our heart yearns for more, we must overcome we feel the rhythm within our bosom joy experience in fleeting transience what avail, awareness without freedom each sensorium wishes to blossom not part quintessence but full effulgence our heart yearns for more, we must overcome discontent with bliss vibration seldom let unbroken be, dance of innocence what avail, awareness without freedom no fear residuum in Gods kingdom flickers yet flame of bliss incandescence our heart yearns for more, we must overcome need jump quantum to imbibe full spectrum radiance must outpour in permanence what avail, awareness without freedom our heart yearns for more, we must overcome 29-May-2021

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Date: 5/29/2021 6:38:00 PM
I love to jump quantum every chance I get lol, your poem is out of this world and I love it, thank you :)
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Date: 5/29/2021 8:57:00 PM
Thank you, Mystic Rose! :)
Date: 5/29/2021 7:36:00 AM
A beautiful villanelle. Your imagery is prefect.
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Date: 5/29/2021 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Victor!

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