Fleeting Freedom

The cool breath of fall
Frees the leaves from their prison
Floating to their death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 4:02 AM
Congratulations on your win Larry in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:44 PM
nice one , congrats on your HM in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 11:19 AM
From prison to death. Bleak, just like the coming winter! Good one, Larry and congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 7:07 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Larry
Taylor Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 5:56 PM
Congrats, Larry. Nice going, my friend. Kudos. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 5:19 PM
Congrats Larry on your HM in Rick's contest ...a lovely poem and honor to enjoy tonight ..with luv..
Mehta Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 3:09 AM
You are an expert in writing haiku. Larry. It is your cup of teA
Taylor Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 6:49 PM
Got my rake ready. Awesome Haiku. Ralph
Buggs Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 6:42 PM
This is one the best haiku I've ever read,it sends chillis down my spine.This is very beautifully wirtten...............wow
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August 16, 2010 at 6:25 PM
I like the personification you give the season, Larry. Very beautifully written haiku! Love, Carolyn
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