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Fleet Summer Storm

We sense a distant throb like drums of war, Hear whistles, shrill, precede firm lifeguards’ cry, “Get out!” as drops, way off, slant down and pour; Look there!—chill, sudden gust, umbrellas fly, Tense mothers rush, all eyes upon gray sky, To youngsters trembling, safe from surf and sea; Harsh cracking whip, white klieg bulb flashes high, Then, snug and wrapped, with mothers, children flee, Find autos’ shelter, beach deprived hot summer glee. July 3, 2018 Summer Rain Storm (2) Spencerian Stanza Poetry Contest Dale Gregory Cozart, Sponsor

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Date: 7/12/2018 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery.
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Date: 7/10/2018 9:22:00 AM
Wow. It's like I was watching it come on. Very dynamic imagery. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/10/2018 8:37:00 AM
Well done on your write! :)
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:31:00 PM
This is wonderful David! Congratulations on your high placement! : )
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Date: 7/9/2018 5:33:00 PM
A Summer storm described so aptly! Very nice!
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David Bose
Date: 7/11/2018 8:24:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, I always appreciate your kind words. They give me encouragement. Thanks again.
Date: 7/9/2018 2:04:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, David.
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Date: 7/9/2018 11:41:00 AM
very vivid imagery David, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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David Bose
Date: 7/11/2018 8:22:00 AM
Thanks, Jan, you're hugs are always encouraging. I appreciate it.
Date: 7/9/2018 11:17:00 AM
David, congratulations on your 4th Place win! This was a tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
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David Bose
Date: 7/11/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thanks very much--I appreciate the encouragement and the time and effort you expended sponsoring the contest.
Date: 7/4/2018 12:50:00 AM
Hi David, creative write!
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