Fledgling

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fledgling female red cardinal bathes in bird bath.... frost on daylilies

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Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/26/2017 2:24:00 AM

Excellent and a very picturesque haiku. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/25/2017 7:58:00 AM

Enjoyed your haku Sara. Hugs.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/25/2017 10:39:00 AM

Rajat, Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you reading my work..Sara

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/24/2017 10:47:00 AM

Lovely haiku ...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/24/2017 2:27:00 PM

Probir, Thanks for dropping by..Your presence is always appreciate on my poetry page..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/21/2017 7:12:00 AM

Oh what a beautifully well written Haiku my friend! I certainly loved the way you wrote this illustrious poem, so filled with tenderness and giving off a feel of compassion! I really enjoyed reading this grandiose piece this morning! What a fantastic write, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/21/2017 9:51:00 AM

Russell, Your presence at my page is always encouraging..Thanks for dropping by..I did feel for that bird down in the water when the air temp was about 47 degrees..I wondered how cold it was and if it was cold but it seemed to enjoy the bath..Sara

Silent One

Date: 10/20/2017 3:29:00 PM

This is just lovely..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/20/2017 5:01:00 PM

SO, Your visits are always uplifting..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/20/2017 2:22:00 PM

Oh this is so cute! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/20/2017 4:59:00 PM

Arthur, Thanks for the visit to my page..I know that water was cold this morning when that bird took a bath because it was around 47 degrees outside..She must have had something bothering her or felt she was really dirty..Sara