Get Your Premium Membership

Flawless Wish

Written by D. W. Breidenthal You take my breath away I wanna stay in this entrancing paradise I want all of the negativity to fade away The darkness isn’t my property…I despise Living a life that’s filled with misperception and disaster I would love to live in the ocean’s ecstasy That would be spectacular if we can abide in the sparkly sea This eccentric dilemma makes your angelic features too unclear It chills me to the bone… My heart pounds with hope and fear… when will peace draw near This flawless wish remains unknown The night’s approaching…seek shelter and light Painstaking regrets – I can’t back away from gravity’s pull Hand me the rope and don’t bestow your burdens upon my soul Sift away the misfortune and allow me to put up with the fight Help me fulfill my flawless wish And I’ll strip away your anguish You’re a burning candle I raise my head up from the mud I step forward with courage that I couldn’t handle On my own, but you stripped away the agony Watch us grow and sprout as one flower bud! You took my heart to a wonderful place I wanna desert this decaying body of mine and seek you in splendid light You forgave me for my wrongs…you thrilled me with praise I wanna embrace the dawn’s incredible, appealing light... Sweeping away the deploring night It soothes my sensitive heart…dismissing my vexing misery I have the urge to repaint the breathtaking memories I’ve spent with you Will it scratch away the sorrow? I have to search for shelter and burn away our calamity – slaying us with rue Will my flawless wish store hope for tomorrow?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

A comment has not been posted for this poem. Encourage a poet by being the first to comment.


Book: Shattered Sighs