Flashes of Lightning

Lover #1- Gentlemans Haiku

              Flashes of Lightning
                    Reveal her honey skintone
                          I graze her softly

Lover #2- Ladies Tanka

                  I close my eyes light
                      Surrender to his Embrace
                  Feel our hearts balance
                       As desire makes them race
                  Beside him, I take my place


~Miranda Lambert~
**contest: Love Talks by Debbie Guzzi**
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 13, 2011 at 8:34 AM
A lovely entry Miranda with unique dialogue to compliment both forms used luv.. sorry it did not place in the contest ..mine only received an HM and it is disheartening but we continue to enter all the contests for the joy of the Poetry .. hope u will read my new poem and new blog today ..."for the POETRY" ... thankxxx..
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March 11, 2011 at 4:39 PM
Best wishes in Deb's contest with this creative write, Miranda. Soup mail in a second. Love, Carolyn
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March 9, 2011 at 1:52 PM
thats deep really good poem
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