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Flash Secret

Brimming love potion at sunrise
ornate cookies of motherhood,
drape our savored taste buds;
'Oh! She must love to cook'.
Sliding 'neath her pillow of dusk,
mom's poetry flashes secrets.


May 25, 2020
HEXASTICH IT Poetry Contest
Sponsor: nette onclaud
Title Chosen: FLASH
~~Winner: 4th Place 


STRAND no 780, any theme any form Contest
~~Winner: 3rd Place

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/9/2020 2:32:00 PM this one is very subtle. I like it very much, Aditi! Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 6/10/2020 12:15:00 PM Thank you for your kind wishes dear Andrea. Blessings and love :)

Beata Agustin Date: 6/1/2020 7:35:00 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. This makes me nostalgic of my dear Mom who's now with the Lord. Keep writing and inspiring. Likewise, I truly appreciate your comments as I do admire your talent. God bless you. Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 6/1/2020 10:20:00 PM Glad you loved my words Beata. Hope you are fine. You are a brilliant poet. Thank you for admiring my words. God bless you :)

Paul Callus Date: 5/30/2020 3:52:00 PM This poem brings back strong memories, Aditi. I enjoyed watching mum cook, and although I imitate all she did, I can never seem to bring back to life the taste and aroma of her cooking! ~ Congratulation son your fine and deserved win. Regards // paul Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/30/2020 5:13:00 PM I am glad my words took you into beautiful memories. I can correlate with mine. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and blessings Paul :)

Jan Allison Date: 5/30/2020 1:02:00 PM This is so charming, i especially love those final two lines Aditi, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/30/2020 1:23:00 PM Thanks so much for your appreciation Jan :)

Joseph May Date: 5/30/2020 12:00:00 PM Very nicely done Aditi, Congrats on your win.. Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/30/2020 12:21:00 PM Thank you for your appreciation Joseph :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/30/2020 11:59:00 AM mothers can always pull our leg...interesting read, aditi which deserves a nice win in my contest... thanks and huggs! Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/30/2020 12:20:00 PM Thank you for your lovely appreciation and for my placement in your contest Nette. God bless you :)

John Watt Date: 5/30/2020 12:48:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this charming and evocative poem, my friend! Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/30/2020 10:56:00 AM Thank you so much my dear friend. God bless you :)

Mohan Chutani Date: 5/30/2020 12:28:00 AM I think it is more about you and kids, given your own poetic finesse. Congrats. Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/30/2020 10:55:00 AM I hope when I have kids one day I can experience the same thing Mohan. Thank you for your wishes :)

Jenish Somadas Date: 5/29/2020 11:52:00 PM Back with congrats Aditi..Mom's poetry flashes.. Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/30/2020 10:55:00 AM Thank you for your wishes Jenish :)

John Watt Date: 5/25/2020 10:46:00 PM Aditi, I concur with Jenish, the sixth line is my favorite. My children were lucky to have a mom who was a poet in the kitchen. Lovely sentiments in evocative words. Well done, and best wishes in the hexastich it contest ~ John Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/26/2020 9:32:00 AM Your words brought a smile on my face. You must have a lovely company of your wife who loves poetry. Thank you for appreciating my words. Glad you could relate. Thank you for appreciating my efforts :)

Jenish Somadas Date: 5/25/2020 10:40:00 AM mom's poetry flashes secrets... Sweet lovely verse.. Good luck.. Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/25/2020 2:47:00 PM Thank you for appreciating Jenish :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/25/2020 7:17:00 AM Oh this is so evocative! The reader brings their own experience always, this piece is titillating my brain Aditi, I hope it does the same for the contest sponsor! My best to you, xomo Login to Reply Aditi Mishra Date: 5/25/2020 2:47:00 PM I am glad you could relate to my words Mo. Thank you for your appreciation. God bless you :)