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Flash Secret

Brimming love potion at sunrise ornate cookies of motherhood, drape our savored taste buds; 'Oh! She must love to cook'. Sliding 'neath her pillow of dusk, mom's poetry flashes secrets. May 25, 2020 HEXASTICH IT Poetry Contest Sponsor: nette onclaud Title Chosen: FLASH ~~Winner: 4th Place STRAND no 780, any theme any form Contest ~~Winner: 3rd Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2020 2:32:00 PM

this one is very subtle. I like it very much, Aditi! Congrats on your win.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/10/2020 12:15:00 PM

Thank you for your kind wishes dear Andrea. Blessings and love :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/1/2020 7:35:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. This makes me nostalgic of my dear Mom who's now with the Lord. Keep writing and inspiring. Likewise, I truly appreciate your comments as I do admire your talent. God bless you.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/1/2020 10:20:00 PM

Glad you loved my words Beata. Hope you are fine. You are a brilliant poet. Thank you for admiring my words. God bless you :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/30/2020 3:52:00 PM

This poem brings back strong memories, Aditi. I enjoyed watching mum cook, and although I imitate all she did, I can never seem to bring back to life the taste and aroma of her cooking! ~ Congratulation son your fine and deserved win. Regards // paul

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/30/2020 5:13:00 PM

I am glad my words took you into beautiful memories. I can correlate with mine. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and blessings Paul :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/30/2020 1:02:00 PM

This is so charming, i especially love those final two lines Aditi, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/30/2020 1:23:00 PM

Thanks so much for your appreciation Jan :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/30/2020 12:00:00 PM

Very nicely done Aditi, Congrats on your win..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/30/2020 12:21:00 PM

Thank you for your appreciation Joseph :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/30/2020 11:59:00 AM

mothers can always pull our leg...interesting read, aditi which deserves a nice win in my contest... thanks and huggs!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/30/2020 12:20:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely appreciation and for my placement in your contest Nette. God bless you :)

John Watt

Date: 5/30/2020 12:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this charming and evocative poem, my friend!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/30/2020 10:56:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend. God bless you :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 5/30/2020 12:28:00 AM

I think it is more about you and kids, given your own poetic finesse. Congrats.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/30/2020 10:55:00 AM

I hope when I have kids one day I can experience the same thing Mohan. Thank you for your wishes :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/29/2020 11:52:00 PM

Back with congrats Aditi..Mom's poetry flashes..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/30/2020 10:55:00 AM

Thank you for your wishes Jenish :)

John Watt

Date: 5/25/2020 10:46:00 PM

Aditi, I concur with Jenish, the sixth line is my favorite. My children were lucky to have a mom who was a poet in the kitchen. Lovely sentiments in evocative words. Well done, and best wishes in the hexastich it contest ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/26/2020 9:32:00 AM

Your words brought a smile on my face. You must have a lovely company of your wife who loves poetry. Thank you for appreciating my words. Glad you could relate. Thank you for appreciating my efforts :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/25/2020 10:40:00 AM

mom's poetry flashes secrets... Sweet lovely verse.. Good luck..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/25/2020 2:47:00 PM

Thank you for appreciating Jenish :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/25/2020 7:17:00 AM

Oh this is so evocative! The reader brings their own experience always, this piece is titillating my brain Aditi, I hope it does the same for the contest sponsor! My best to you, xomo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/25/2020 2:47:00 PM

I am glad you could relate to my words Mo. Thank you for your appreciation. God bless you :)