Flaring Out

Comets cut bedazzling streaks in time
with crescendos and solos divine.
Each meager planet probes with a wince
praying they don't fall within the pinch.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Eckiwaudah Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 12:13 PM
nice poem. loved it. always, cherica lynn <3
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July 18, 2009 at 6:56 PM
Magnificent image of the universe in motion, John! Love, Carolyn
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July 17, 2009 at 3:31 PM
Great Couplet,John. Keep writing. Sara
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