Flank Attack

Enfilading fire
Breastworks deflecting shrapnel
Snipers breach trenches
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 25, 2012 at 8:40 AM
great senryu!! you should enter the senryu contest with this one. I just wrote one entitled loss for the contest about war.
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