Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

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Flaming Spoon of Moon

How the ambrosia of a crescent moon 

pours honey on night's gypsy dance,

inflaming spoon of lips ... to blaze lovers' kiss!



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12.19.2016
Moon Soon for Kai Michael Neumann

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Olusegun Arowolo January 1, 2017 at 11:43 AM Lovely and wonderful piece,Nette..Congrats on your superb win...

Charlie Smith December 29, 2016 at 10:01 AM Lovely, congratulations Nette...

Jean Murray December 28, 2016 at 4:04 PM Beautiful Nette. Well done.

Afzal Nusker December 28, 2016 at 6:51 AM Splendid! Congratulations on your top win.

Joanna Daniel December 28, 2016 at 3:44 AM Your imagery rages, Nette:) congratulations:)

Sandra Haight December 27, 2016 at 7:04 PM Amazing imagery, Nette. Congratulations on your first place win. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2016 at 5:08 PM ohhhh, that was so nice. I remember it from before. COngrats for top win.

Mark Martin December 27, 2016 at 12:05 PM Great link between noon and spoon. Congrats Nette! :-)

Paul Callus December 27, 2016 at 11:32 AM An 'ambrosian' sensual delight, Nette...you made full use of these three lines. Congratulations on placing first!! Hugs // paul

Eve Roper December 27, 2016 at 10:53 AM Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Winged Warrior December 27, 2016 at 10:18 AM Congrats!!! my friend nette on your fine win...god bless...^WW^

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen December 27, 2016 at 9:47 AM I am WOW-ed. by these words. Congratulations on your 1st placement.

Janice Canerdy December 27, 2016 at 9:33 AM A 7 for your lovely top-winning piece, Nette! Janice

Jan Allison December 27, 2016 at 9:31 AM Many congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2016 at 8:47 AM And 7

Kim Rodrigues December 27, 2016 at 8:44 AM Oh, so beautiful! Congrats on your deliciously deserved win!

Kai Michael Neumann December 27, 2016 at 8:01 AM Nette, this is beautiful. 'Crescent moon to blaze lover's kiss'.b Awesome.

Andrea Dietrich December 22, 2016 at 8:26 PM wow, a sensual one. I likes it, Nette!!

Darren White December 21, 2016 at 4:14 AM Oh, how wonderful! And that picture :)

David Meade December 19, 2016 at 11:17 PM Sweet and delicious -- lips to devour in kisses, loved your word choices!!

Chris Green December 19, 2016 at 9:30 AM Such and beautifully enchanting piece Nette. I am never disappointed when I stop by your work. Good luck in the contest.

Connie Marcum Wong December 19, 2016 at 2:30 AM Enchanting Nette and I will bet a winning entry! 7 ; )

Space Cadet December 19, 2016 at 1:51 AM Ambrosia of a crescent moon ... beautiful stuff. :) W.

CayCay Godwin December 18, 2016 at 10:09 PM Excellent! CayCay

Alexis Y. December 18, 2016 at 9:43 PM Hi Nette, This is so lovely. It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

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