Flaming Fantasy

mind in soul
body entwine in heart
making the thrist of fire enrage

devastation is near 
waiting and wanting 
the passionate that lingers near

standing in the shadows not far
but with in eyesight a strange figure
walks slowly out into the moon light 

walking towards me 
as rain is coming down harder

i nervously walk toward him 
i quiver what i see before me

a desire for a relish of soft moist lips
the taste of warm rain that enhances the sweetness
of pure desire for pure pleasure in sweet delight

the touch of hands that are drenched from the warm rain
working out of the garments that seem to be attached
while ripping them away we ache through it all

lusting what is near that will become
now the rain in the moon lite area 
with the night being right

hot breaths make us blowing steam
out in the air, screaming that match 
with the thunder so near

wanting the warm rain to never end 
the heart desires more than it appears
aching and unravling is in the near

with the passion of warm rain
will it come again someday

fire burning within that can't 
wait to hold the sensation in
crying out the pleasure of 
sweet essence from within

with ecstasy from a depth
i say goodnight will 
i see you again

warm rain come again 
pure delights that hold within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/8/2011 8:52:00 PM
a most beautiful and moving poem.
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