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Flamethrower

sun rises hot flashes all night my flame thrower

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/18/2012 2:46:00 PM
Hola Ralph, a very bolt-y image within your haiku. Hope it's only a poem of hot passion... enjoyed..pd
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Date: 9/18/2012 2:37:00 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 9/18/2012 2:22:00 PM
Ralph, lovely haiku - well done. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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