Flamed Glimpses

on moonless park bench-- language from deep glimpses tell of ardor aflame ~ For Tania Kitchin's Valentine Senryu 1/05/2019
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Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 7:41 PM
Very nice, Nette. Congrats for your win and an early happy Valentines day greeting to you.
Roper Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Great Senryu, Nette, have a Happy Valentine's Day.. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve~`*
Callus Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 2:56 PM
Romance and passion, even though no moon is around to spill its spell! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 12:56 PM
- Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 11:41 AM
Lovely imagery Nette, congratulations on your winning placement!
Kendrick Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 8:07 AM
Reads like a good contender. How the eyes can talk. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 5:45 AM
Beautifully done. My imagination was captured by your first three words.
Kannan Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 8:24 AM
So beautiful, Nette. Good luck in the contest.
Vaso Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 6:24 AM
I like, wish I was on a park bench!!! :)
Rose  Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 5:43 AM
Bet the moon is settled in their eyes, come what may they need to express, Lovely senryu dear Nette, hope your day is fantastical today o
Cunningham Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 2:21 AM
Well written Nette, very romantic senyry. Tom.
Sabre Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 3:00 PM
Actions speak louder than words. Enticing senryu for Valentine's. Also glad you found time for cheers about my work. Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 2:02 PM
- There is romance in the air, Nette ... beautiful :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 1:59 PM
Ooh that's nice. Lovely done. xomo
Devonshire Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 1:59 PM
Excellent imagery, Nette. The reader can sense the passion. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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