Flame Exchange (Naga-Uta Lyric)

Winter chills my bones
But you warm me to the core
Hold me tightly then
Burn me; fire me up tonight
As fire emits love 
You are the source of the flame
For eternity
You’ll be the fire in my heart
And I’ll be the fire in yours
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 21, 2008 at 4:00 AM
A very lovely exchange of passion indeed my friend, Congratulations Michael on a well deserved win... :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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September 19, 2008 at 3:50 AM
Congrats on your win Michael! This poem is sizzlin'! Excellent! Love Kristin
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September 18, 2008 at 5:03 PM
Congratulations Michael on your Third Place win in Brian's contest! Steamy hot. Well done! Love, Shar
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September 18, 2008 at 1:00 PM
Congratulations Michael on your third place finish in Brian's Naga-Uta contest. Way to go!! This is a timely piece with winter approaching. Hope your love keeps buring. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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August 30, 2008 at 4:53 PM
Sounds like a fiery proposition. Good one. Regards Heidie
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August 29, 2008 at 7:48 AM
This is passion in the making! Very simmering poem, Michael!.....Carrie
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August 29, 2008 at 7:39 AM
lovely, as some find such truth in love...I like this form of poetry as you have written it excellently.
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August 29, 2008 at 5:12 AM
Ouch - hot stuff, filled with the flames of love! Well done lyric, Michael, hot my poetic friend! Kristin
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