Flame

Flame warm orange-red glow cosy and soothing in the frigid clime and kills when teased.

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Bl Devnath

Date: 9/29/2013 12:06:00 PM

Excellent haiku my friend on Flame. A great philosophy is there behind it. Lovely done. Loved always, bl

Joseph Matose
Date: 9/29/2013 11:49:00 PM

Thanks bl. You see, Haiku is a bit of a challenge. I'm still trying to get to grips with its shortness and complexity. I enjoy reading yours, maybe one day I will be sort of up to scratch! JM

Cherie Thomas

Date: 9/23/2013 8:08:00 PM

Great job, jm. Haiku are way harder than they look. I need to try one, im not there yet lol. :) cherie

Joseph Matose
Date: 9/23/2013 11:40:00 PM

I started writing poetry some twenty years ago. But, Haiku, I learned it hardly a month after joining Soup. I concede that Soup will perfect my art. I learn new styles, new poetics everyday. Try it and you will enjoy it. JM

Yvette Lisa Ndlovu

Date: 9/22/2013 4:47:00 AM

Witty...lol...loved the haiku ^_^ Y.L.N

Joseph Matose
Date: 9/22/2013 7:15:00 AM

Thank you very very much for your lovely comment. Please keep on reading my poetry. Hugs! JM