Flame

Flame


warm orange-red glow
cosy and soothing in the frigid clime
and kills when teased.

haiku

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Bl Devnath

September 29, 2013 at 12:06 PM

Excellent haiku my friend on Flame. A great philosophy is there behind it. Lovely done. Loved always, bl

Joseph Matose

September 29, 2013 at 11:49 PM

Thanks bl. You see, Haiku is a bit of a challenge. I'm still trying to get to grips with its shortness and complexity. I enjoy reading yours, maybe one day I will be sort of up to scratch! JM

Cherie Thomas

September 23, 2013 at 8:08 PM

Great job, jm. Haiku are way harder than they look. I need to try one, im not there yet lol. :) cherie

Joseph Matose

September 23, 2013 at 11:40 PM

I started writing poetry some twenty years ago. But, Haiku, I learned it hardly a month after joining Soup. I concede that Soup will perfect my art. I learn new styles, new poetics everyday. Try it and you will enjoy it. JM